Anthony
(I never knew you
Like I know I should have
Now I watch you
Your eyes fixed, blank
Laughter fled and tears forgotten
Clutching chill and tender fist
Though life has long slipped through its grip)
Saying goodbye
Is like letting go
And it's hard
But He's holding my hand
Just like He held yours
And carried you through the flood.
Tuesday, April 29, 2008
How do I lose myself?
I am not easily misplaced Or forgotten, Arriving as I do Before even the curtains draw And that first morning jug boils, Bleary, yes Grudgin...
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She shares the blame For Adam's fall So secure, attractive Brilliant in a certain view The essence of Enlightenment I see her raise her ...
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Final Thoughts From an AGM You want to mess with me? I can take you down a notch Spill the beans I’ll spill your blood Tooth for tooth, splo...
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Standing on a Hillside Sometimes you look back on where you have been Past the cloud-fluffy daffodils bobbing and green Through the deep dar...
4 comments:
I don't like the first verse (hence it is in brackets), but I feel the poem needs more than the last verse.
Hmm.
Maybe I'll rewrite it later
Na it's good. Leave it as it is.
Just my opinion.
i love it Matt. Beautiful. keep it up.
very cool.. i like this one.
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