Anthony
(I never knew you
Like I know I should have
Now I watch you
Your eyes fixed, blank
Laughter fled and tears forgotten
Clutching chill and tender fist
Though life has long slipped through its grip)
Saying goodbye
Is like letting go
And it's hard
But He's holding my hand
Just like He held yours
And carried you through the flood.
Tuesday, April 29, 2008
I'm bad at vulnerability I like to tie off places Where mess might hide Might wander in to introduce themself Until I'm all kn...
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To slumber And not be tossed about Like an incomplete formula In the mind of a mathematician Is a good thing The solution Lies in reme...
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She shares the blame For Adam's fall So secure, attractive Brilliant in a certain view The essence of Enlightenment I see her raise her ...
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Late It's practically done, more or less Plus or minus it's my best Effort if you squint and side-eye It. I'm sure it will get b...
4 comments:
I don't like the first verse (hence it is in brackets), but I feel the poem needs more than the last verse.
Hmm.
Maybe I'll rewrite it later
Na it's good. Leave it as it is.
Just my opinion.
i love it Matt. Beautiful. keep it up.
very cool.. i like this one.
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